BARcomics #1: project rip off

this is my first digital comic strip made out of my own elements of fantasy and slice of life and incase anyones notice the white lines on the characters, thats because I drew them on the same layer of the panel while using ink fillers to give them color. it took me half an hour yesterday to work on this thing because when I drew the black lines on the squere panels. I went on to the next layer but couldn't tell if I was connecting the characters on the line so I thought that next time when I draw the next comic strip, I could make the panel lines grey and then trace em' black on the next layer when drawing characters. I hope you like this one? P.S heres a link to Elstorko. [link]